Friday, 12 August 2016

I can’t wait for summer. winter in Greymouth it is raining like icicles dripping on a warm winter day also grey gloomy and windy but also sometimes sunny like a pleasant radiant day but with a fresh cold briskey breeze. Although you can’t go swimming as much in winter you can still play sports. Sometimes I imagine the cold white fresh snow powdering the ground like a baker briskly powdering a brown cake with icing sugar. The soft but brisk frost covers the car and as I wipe it off my hand send sharp sleek shivers down my hand.

1 comment:

  1. I think this is a great description of winter in Greymouth. You have used great similes and metaphor.

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